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Pitch 2

New idea

After a discussion as a group, we decided that there were a lot of changes that needed to be made in terms of our genre and plot flaws. We established that we needed to choose a more suitable genre that we could make a realistic trailer which is why we decided that thriller would be a more suitable genre. With thriller as our genre this also meant we could focus on the chase scenes

and suspense of our trailer.

 

Although our idea still maintains some of its original concepts, we have changed many the ideas to make our trailer more achievable and better suited to our new genre.

 

We have compiled our new ideas into a second pitch and hopefully we have improved upon our orignal idea and created a new idea that will allow to creating an intense and gripping thriller trailer.

 

We plan to present our second pitch on the November 14th.

 

On November 14th we performed our second pitch where we showed our teacher the improvements that we have made to our ideas and how it has changed and adapted to fit our new genre.

Overall, we recieved some more positive feedback from our second pitch as the ideas were more consistent and we had a better handle on our idea. With that in mind we are now going to start creating our storyboards and put our ideas into practice.

 

We kept the same pitch presentation and just explained what we intended on changing such as the storyline and the props.

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